The Art of Building Suspense: Techniques for Keeping Readers on Edge

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Ah, suspense—the lifeblood of any story that keeps you up at night, flipping page after page, desperate to find out what happens next. Whether it’s a thriller that has you on the edge of your seat, a mystery that wraps you in its enigmatic embrace, or even a romance where you’re yearning to see if the protagonists ever confess their love, the art of building suspense is key to keeping readers hooked. So, how do writers do it? Let’s peel back the curtain and uncover some of the techniques that keep us all in suspense.

1. The Promise of Revelation

First things first, the foundation of suspense is the promise that secrets will be unveiled. Think about it like dangling a carrot in front of your readers but pulling it just out of reach until the right moment. This could be the identity of the murderer in a whodunit or the outcome of a perilous journey in an adventure story. The key is to make the promise early and keep reminding readers of it, building anticipation.

2. Raising Stakes

If the story’s outcome doesn’t matter much to the characters, it won’t matter to the readers either. That’s why raising the stakes is crucial. The higher the stakes, the more readers will be invested in the outcome. Whether it’s a character’s survival, the fate of a relationship, or the prevention of a disaster, make sure the consequences of failure are dire.

3. The Art of Delay

Ah, the delicious agony of delay! Skilled writers know how to stretch the tension by interrupting a crucial moment with something else—a memory, an unrelated event, or a new obstacle. This technique, when used sparingly, can enhance suspense by making readers wait for the resolution they crave.

4. Unreliable Narrators

There’s something inherently suspenseful about not being able to trust the story’s narrator. When readers are aware that the perspective they’re getting might be skewed or outright false, they’re on edge, questioning everything and eagerly turning pages to uncover the truth.

5. Cliffhangers

The classic cliffhanger, where a chapter or section ends at a moment of high tension, is a tried-and-true method for keeping readers engaged. The key to a great cliffhanger is to resolve one question or conflict while introducing a new one, keeping the narrative momentum going.

6. Red Herrings and False Clues

Especially effective in mysteries and thrillers, red herrings are misleading clues or information that divert readers’ attention away from the actual solution or twist. When used effectively, they can amplify suspense by leading readers down the wrong path, only to surprise them later.

7. Multiple Points of View

Switching between different characters’ perspectives can heighten suspense by providing readers with a more complete picture of the situation than any single character has. This technique can create dramatic irony, where the reader knows something crucial that the characters do not, adding to the suspense.

Wrapping It Up

Building suspense is a delicate dance of revealing and concealing, a balance between keeping readers in the dark and illuminating the path just enough to keep them moving forward. It’s about making promises and then making readers wait—eagerly, breathlessly—for those promises to be fulfilled.

Employing these techniques with finesse requires practice and a deep understanding of your story and characters. But when done right, you’ll not only keep your readers on edge—you’ll have them coming back for more, eager to dive into whatever world you choose to craft next. After all, isn’t the thrill of the chase what it’s all about?

References:

  • King, Stephen. On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft. Scribner, 2000. King discusses the importance of stakes and narrative drive.
  • Kress, Nancy. Characters, Emotion & Viewpoint. Writer’s Digest Books, 2005. Kress explores how characters’ emotions can be used to build suspense.
  • Brooks, Larry. Story Engineering. Writer’s Digest Books, 2011. Brooks touches on the elements of story structure that contribute to suspense.
  • Zuckerman, Albert. Writing the Blockbuster Novel. Forge Books, 1994. Zuckerman offers insights into crafting compelling narratives that keep readers engaged.

Published by L. Marie Wood

L. Marie Wood is an International Impact, Golden Stake, and two-time Bookfest Award-winning, Ignyte and four-time Bram Stoker Award® nominated author. Wood is the Vice President of the Horror Writers Association, founder of the Speculative Fiction Academy, an English/Creative Writing professor, and a horror scholar. Learn more at www.lmariewood.com.

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